The Journey
Morgan Hunt
The blazing sun
Cast few shadows
Of many tomorrows
Forbearing promises
Of water…or life itself
Ma & Pa convey
With a sense of knowing
Though I question
Their better judgment
But, have no clue myself
The hot golden sand
Surrounds us
A dry ocean
Absorbing us deeper
Than we realized
Faith strikes through
We reach the Oasis
A shot of relief
For all the Caravans
We stop…
The beauty
Has us paralyzed.
We stand in a daze
Not noticing the sun beating down
Or the rough gritty sand
For we are indulging in the moment
This is why we strived
Long strenuous walks
Parched throats
Blistering feet
Just to be upon the Oasis
Fertile green land
Shimmering blue water
Makes the journey worth while
Tuesday, November 4, 2008
sunset 05
Reds and pinks
Scattered across the sky
The world changes
As the sun says good-bye
Tinted clouds of wonderful colors
The last rays of sun shine through
Wonderful thoughts start to float into my mind
And one of them is you
Scattered across the sky
The world changes
As the sun says good-bye
Tinted clouds of wonderful colors
The last rays of sun shine through
Wonderful thoughts start to float into my mind
And one of them is you
06 snow whispers
Snow Whispers
The silent whispers of snowfall
Dusting the tops of trees
Moving across the ground
With the slightest bit of ease
Bring lots of joy
With the secret of the holidays
Cheering all the little ones
On their gloomy winter days
Enlightening the world
Bringing things to life
The little gifts that god gives
Are always filled with delight
The blessings that we take
Not knowing what we are going to receive
Adds to our list of reasons
To truly believe
To believe in the holiday spirit
To bring it throughout our life
Doesn’t matter how we do it
As long as we keep it alive
By Morgan Hunt
The silent whispers of snowfall
Dusting the tops of trees
Moving across the ground
With the slightest bit of ease
Bring lots of joy
With the secret of the holidays
Cheering all the little ones
On their gloomy winter days
Enlightening the world
Bringing things to life
The little gifts that god gives
Are always filled with delight
The blessings that we take
Not knowing what we are going to receive
Adds to our list of reasons
To truly believe
To believe in the holiday spirit
To bring it throughout our life
Doesn’t matter how we do it
As long as we keep it alive
By Morgan Hunt
sunflower march 07
Oh dew speckled sunflower,
How you glisten in the light
What truly give you the spirit,
For petals so yellow & bright?
Is it the vivid green grass?
Or the sparkling stars at night?
What truly give you the courage
That makes it worth the fight?
What is it exactly
That gives you all your might?
Is it the sun shining above?
The clouds, soft & white?
Whatever it may be,
That keeps your hopes up high
Never stop doing,
What makes you feel alive
How you glisten in the light
What truly give you the spirit,
For petals so yellow & bright?
Is it the vivid green grass?
Or the sparkling stars at night?
What truly give you the courage
That makes it worth the fight?
What is it exactly
That gives you all your might?
Is it the sun shining above?
The clouds, soft & white?
Whatever it may be,
That keeps your hopes up high
Never stop doing,
What makes you feel alive
nothing to write 05
Nothing to write
No thoughts in my head
Though I want to write a message
That no one has read
I cant find the right words
Not even a flow
My thoughts are frozen
But I want them to go
I just cant write
I need some inspiration
My brain is gone
Its on vacation
I want it back
So I can write something new
Something exciting
To share with all of you
No thoughts in my head
Though I want to write a message
That no one has read
I cant find the right words
Not even a flow
My thoughts are frozen
But I want them to go
I just cant write
I need some inspiration
My brain is gone
Its on vacation
I want it back
So I can write something new
Something exciting
To share with all of you
oct. 05 a friend
A friend
A friend is someone special
Who has a place in your heart
You know it would be hard to live
If you were ever to part
An unforgettable person
Who knows your hopes and dreams
Someone you can talk to when your heart breaks
And they will sow back the seems
Someone you can laugh with
And even cry
Someone that would bring tears
If you had to say goodbye
A friend is someone that sometimes words cant describe
A person you can trust through a through
The clearest description of a friend
That I could find is you
By Morgan Hunt
Dedicated to Emily for her birthday
A friend is someone special
Who has a place in your heart
You know it would be hard to live
If you were ever to part
An unforgettable person
Who knows your hopes and dreams
Someone you can talk to when your heart breaks
And they will sow back the seems
Someone you can laugh with
And even cry
Someone that would bring tears
If you had to say goodbye
A friend is someone that sometimes words cant describe
A person you can trust through a through
The clearest description of a friend
That I could find is you
By Morgan Hunt
Dedicated to Emily for her birthday
poor woman
Don’t stare at me with those cold eyes.
You don’t know.
For that matter, neither do you care.
So much, I wish you would realize
How much I crave to be you.
My wrinkles are not from laughter,
Although I can see yours will be.
Your books, that blue one…
I could not read if I wanted to.
Everyday I see you pass,
With your pig tails.
I see your mother cares enough to buy you ribbons.
And I?
I don’t even have a mother.
I am my own mother;
My own friend.
But if I were you, and you were me…
I too may not give you much thought.
However, time to time I would spare some change.
Or at least a smile.
You don’t know.
For that matter, neither do you care.
So much, I wish you would realize
How much I crave to be you.
My wrinkles are not from laughter,
Although I can see yours will be.
Your books, that blue one…
I could not read if I wanted to.
Everyday I see you pass,
With your pig tails.
I see your mother cares enough to buy you ribbons.
And I?
I don’t even have a mother.
I am my own mother;
My own friend.
But if I were you, and you were me…
I too may not give you much thought.
However, time to time I would spare some change.
Or at least a smile.
alter ego
Oh my lord!
Will you both shut up back there!
Its’ your fault we’re in this pickle
This never, ever would have happened
if you both would’ve settled down.
Bad; bad ora!
Now we’re gonna be even later!
He wont even notice my new cut.. or nails.
You ruined everything.
You little monsters!
Oh I do regret the day you were born,
STOP YOUR CRYING!
You’re not the one
Who wasted all day doing your hair
I look so gorgeous,
And now NO ONE important will get to see me.
Will you both shut up back there!
Its’ your fault we’re in this pickle
This never, ever would have happened
if you both would’ve settled down.
Bad; bad ora!
Now we’re gonna be even later!
He wont even notice my new cut.. or nails.
You ruined everything.
You little monsters!
Oh I do regret the day you were born,
STOP YOUR CRYING!
You’re not the one
Who wasted all day doing your hair
I look so gorgeous,
And now NO ONE important will get to see me.
unfolding fire 0ct. 05
Unfolding Fire
Red and yellow
Glistening so bright
Spreading warmth
For the critters of the night
Bringing memories
Waiting to unfold
Around the campfire
So vibrant so bold
Red and yellow
Glistening so bright
Spreading warmth
For the critters of the night
Bringing memories
Waiting to unfold
Around the campfire
So vibrant so bold
So this is nantucket
So This Is Nantucket…
Sandy pavement, hot with sun
Mends with tired cobblestones
Empty fields filled with restless grass
Reach to its wide beaches
Her arms stretch out
Soft yet grainy; a holder of many footsteps
Speckled with pearls
And held by green ribbons
So this is Nantucket; midst of August
Strolling through the heart of town
Making your way to the oasis
Meeting happy faces all around
You feel like that; you feel like
Sharing many laughs, like stopping
To rest your thoughts, like letting
Your problems go out with the tide
Sweet scent of Rosa Ragusa
Mellows your mood
So you no longer feel
Anger against those many tourists
Instead you feel like sharing a smile
For peace is plentiful
Problems are few
And the sunshine warm
-Morgan Hunt
Sandy pavement, hot with sun
Mends with tired cobblestones
Empty fields filled with restless grass
Reach to its wide beaches
Her arms stretch out
Soft yet grainy; a holder of many footsteps
Speckled with pearls
And held by green ribbons
So this is Nantucket; midst of August
Strolling through the heart of town
Making your way to the oasis
Meeting happy faces all around
You feel like that; you feel like
Sharing many laughs, like stopping
To rest your thoughts, like letting
Your problems go out with the tide
Sweet scent of Rosa Ragusa
Mellows your mood
So you no longer feel
Anger against those many tourists
Instead you feel like sharing a smile
For peace is plentiful
Problems are few
And the sunshine warm
-Morgan Hunt
stupid. 05.
New places
New people
Everythings new
Almost a dream
Just without you
I wish you were here
Standing by me
Just to know you are there
Makes me so happy
I miss you so much
You just wouldn’t believe
You & me together
Is something that I need
New people
Everythings new
Almost a dream
Just without you
I wish you were here
Standing by me
Just to know you are there
Makes me so happy
I miss you so much
You just wouldn’t believe
You & me together
Is something that I need
november 05
Intensely Broken Down
Pouring tears
Trickling down my face
Bringing memories
That I want to erase
Terrible thoughts
Swarming in my head
I want them to leave
But instead they spread
Wondering through out my head
Dispersed within my thoughts
It’s getting more intense
With the more I want it to stop
Pouring tears
Trickling down my face
Bringing memories
That I want to erase
Terrible thoughts
Swarming in my head
I want them to leave
But instead they spread
Wondering through out my head
Dispersed within my thoughts
It’s getting more intense
With the more I want it to stop
oct. 05
Confused
I am so confused
I have never felt this way
I didn’t see it coming
I just want to run away
The tears that I have cried
Are all because of you
Why did you do this?
I cared so much for you
Now you are gone
You are forever left behind
Never to return
In the heart that I call mine
You have left my dreams
But in my wishes you may stay
I know you have left
But I don’t want you to go away
By Morgan Hunt
I am so confused
I have never felt this way
I didn’t see it coming
I just want to run away
The tears that I have cried
Are all because of you
Why did you do this?
I cared so much for you
Now you are gone
You are forever left behind
Never to return
In the heart that I call mine
You have left my dreams
But in my wishes you may stay
I know you have left
But I don’t want you to go away
By Morgan Hunt
rich girl monologue
Its’ not the right red; too light.
Why? Why can’t people just make things my way
I do not wish to kiss death itself to get the color I want
But I WANT it to be perfect.
Oh, but this looks nice.
Soft’n shiny.
Maybe if he comes to the party,
Just maybe he’ll be able to tough it,
Run his fingers through it.
Too rash?
Perhaps you’re right.
I’m not sure either if I want him that close to me.
At least, not as close as I am to my diamonds.
Why? Why can’t people just make things my way
I do not wish to kiss death itself to get the color I want
But I WANT it to be perfect.
Oh, but this looks nice.
Soft’n shiny.
Maybe if he comes to the party,
Just maybe he’ll be able to tough it,
Run his fingers through it.
Too rash?
Perhaps you’re right.
I’m not sure either if I want him that close to me.
At least, not as close as I am to my diamonds.
marching little girl picture
Maybe they’ll see me
Marching like I am
Ugh if it wasn’t for my dress
I could kick higher
No matter,
I will tag along anyway,
Is it left than right?
Ugh, this is confusing.
Hey! Where are we going?
Oh, well at least the sun is warm
You’re starting to get freckles.
Soon the boys will point and laugh.
No matter,
Today is better than any other
Marching like I am
Ugh if it wasn’t for my dress
I could kick higher
No matter,
I will tag along anyway,
Is it left than right?
Ugh, this is confusing.
Hey! Where are we going?
Oh, well at least the sun is warm
You’re starting to get freckles.
Soon the boys will point and laugh.
No matter,
Today is better than any other
izzy's bed.
Oh his comfortable bed.
When I am not dreaming in it, I dream of it.
Its coziness absorbs my happy thoughts;
Cradling me into bliss.
His red blanket trapping my warmth
Shutting out the cool night air.
Navy fuzzyness mellows my thoughts.
And I lose all recollection of the days issues.
& only ponder of what tomorrow may bring.
True, his presence has affect,
But I know that we share different dreams upon the same pillows
Pillows filled with soft cotton.
Clouds that ease my thoughts into rest
My second home is found beneath those sheets
A place where I find total peace with myself and the world.
No angry thoughts; not even slightly mad ones.
Just smiles.
When I am not dreaming in it, I dream of it.
Its coziness absorbs my happy thoughts;
Cradling me into bliss.
His red blanket trapping my warmth
Shutting out the cool night air.
Navy fuzzyness mellows my thoughts.
And I lose all recollection of the days issues.
& only ponder of what tomorrow may bring.
True, his presence has affect,
But I know that we share different dreams upon the same pillows
Pillows filled with soft cotton.
Clouds that ease my thoughts into rest
My second home is found beneath those sheets
A place where I find total peace with myself and the world.
No angry thoughts; not even slightly mad ones.
Just smiles.
poems-
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this emptiness is so fullfilling.
though it only feed the sin
my smile has faded greatly
& i no longer let laughter in
but only since you've been gone
have i let my heart sink low
this depression has me pinned
i need you more than i know
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my eyes are open
though the rain pours hard
& tomorrow's mistakes are never ending
You've crossed the bridge
And time goes on
Memories; fade silently
------------------
love sinks low
time moves on
never passing second glances
silence is knowing
what words not to say
& when not to say them
so dont let go
just move on
i'll be one step behind yahh
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i'd hate to see you leave
distance kills
i need you now
follow me home tonite
leave your fears
i'll hand you mine
& everything will be alright
such a feeling
you cant earase
carries you throughout the day
never answering
those little questions
that doubt may have to say
promises are kept
so keep me here
i will not let go
distance kills so much
but we shall only grow
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miss you <3
each tear missing you more than the one before
cant you see, i'm slipping
with nothing but closed doors
holding on without you
makes my life worth nothing
you promised you would come back
& with all my heart i hope
that the words you spoke were true
so that someday in my lifetime
once again,they'll be a me & you
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this emptiness is so fullfilling.
though it only feed the sin
my smile has faded greatly
& i no longer let laughter in
but only since you've been gone
have i let my heart sink low
this depression has me pinned
i need you more than i know
-------------
my eyes are open
though the rain pours hard
& tomorrow's mistakes are never ending
You've crossed the bridge
And time goes on
Memories; fade silently
------------------
love sinks low
time moves on
never passing second glances
silence is knowing
what words not to say
& when not to say them
so dont let go
just move on
i'll be one step behind yahh
--------------
i'd hate to see you leave
distance kills
i need you now
follow me home tonite
leave your fears
i'll hand you mine
& everything will be alright
such a feeling
you cant earase
carries you throughout the day
never answering
those little questions
that doubt may have to say
promises are kept
so keep me here
i will not let go
distance kills so much
but we shall only grow
--------------------
miss you <3
each tear missing you more than the one before
cant you see, i'm slipping
with nothing but closed doors
holding on without you
makes my life worth nothing
you promised you would come back
& with all my heart i hope
that the words you spoke were true
so that someday in my lifetime
once again,they'll be a me & you
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Saturday, March 15, 2008
Parodyy
Love is..
Love is everything: even bread and wine.
Love is everywhere, even in your dreams.
Giving you forgivness a second time,
And it feeds on your words that were once mean.
It grows, and it grows, and grows, to great size,
Until it is the only think you breathe.
Love cleans your sin, like sand in the tide,
Forcing nice words although you hold clenched teeth.
It is that voice that is always back there,
Springing your emotions to spread a smile,
And trying to turn what is wrong to fair
Even if that means you have to let go.
Though many a reason why love is great,
Love is sometimes the reason for our hate.
Love is everything: even bread and wine.
Love is everywhere, even in your dreams.
Giving you forgivness a second time,
And it feeds on your words that were once mean.
It grows, and it grows, and grows, to great size,
Until it is the only think you breathe.
Love cleans your sin, like sand in the tide,
Forcing nice words although you hold clenched teeth.
It is that voice that is always back there,
Springing your emotions to spread a smile,
And trying to turn what is wrong to fair
Even if that means you have to let go.
Though many a reason why love is great,
Love is sometimes the reason for our hate.
Sonnet
She used to let her golden hair fly free,
For she was too poor to own a hair tie.
Her eyes were dull like an ugly birds nest,
Though never a place where nature would be,
And her quick sharp glances gave fear to me.
Spawn of the devil or witch of the west;
without a doubt she was the scariest.
I kept a far distance for my safety.
Her noisy trudge was the least bit graceful,
And you wonder why no one looked her way?
It was fear of death to look in her eyes.
She was evil among the nice people
of hell, But yet she wears a smile today
And somehow she is no longer despised.
For she was too poor to own a hair tie.
Her eyes were dull like an ugly birds nest,
Though never a place where nature would be,
And her quick sharp glances gave fear to me.
Spawn of the devil or witch of the west;
without a doubt she was the scariest.
I kept a far distance for my safety.
Her noisy trudge was the least bit graceful,
And you wonder why no one looked her way?
It was fear of death to look in her eyes.
She was evil among the nice people
of hell, But yet she wears a smile today
And somehow she is no longer despised.
Thursday, February 28, 2008
Ted Kooser- Tattoo - Analysis
The poem "Tattoo" by Ted Kooser dramatizes how things of your youth are carried with you although so much else changes with age. These are dramatized through the comparison of what the tattoo meant at one time and how after years, the old man is just as any other old man. The tone of the poem in the very beginning is straight forward by showing how things in the past linger on, when it comes to the middle it changes over to a strong youth, and the end of the poem is just sort of mellow, as if it is nothing but an ordinary day. The speaker talks about the tattoo on the old man who is at a yard sale on a chilly morning, contrasting his youth and his age to show the mark that the tattoo symbolized in his younger years. The poem shows a theme of how although things change, the past will always be a part of us; such as how a tattoo will stay with you forever. The speaker is observing what the tattoo once meant and figuring what kind of person the man once was by his tattoo. By his tattoo of a dripping dagger held in the fist of a shuddering heart, the speaker says that he looks like someone you had to reckon with. This makes sense because the word fist symbolizes much more than just a hand; it symbolizes something more angry and tough and same with a dripping dagger that also symbolizes that he wouldn't need to think twice before taking vengeance.
The speaker talks about the tattoo first and after the description of the tattoo, there is a period which suggests period between youth and age. After that description there are only commas for punctuation. The tattoo is discussed in the past tense 'What was once meant to be a statement' showing that this tattoo signified what the man was in his youth. He compares who the man was in his youth to being 'as strong as a stallion, fast and ornery,' and then addresses how he is now; 'he is only another old man...his heart gone soft and blue with stories'. It is said that that tattoo is "now just a bruise...where vanity once punched him in the arm." The words punched and bruise portrays that the tattoo was a stamp he deserved more than it was his choice. When the speaker mentions that the old man is 'soft and blue with stories' it connects to the tattoo because a tattoo is something permanent yet fades with age, such a stories. Stories are a part of your youth that you remember, they will always be there and there is no getting rid of them, although they also fade in time. The speaker links strong adjectives when talking about his past, such as 'fast and ornery' or 'strong as a stallion. However, once talking about the present the old man is described as 'only another old man' and that 'his heart gone soft and blue with stories'. This underlines that there is nothing special that makes him stick out. The fact that he walks through the tables his sleeves are rolled up, even though it was previously stated that it was a chilly morning asserts that it is the only thing that shows who he once was. The old man is picking up broken tools which also connects with who he is; something once strong and helpful is now just old and not needed.
In this poem, there are only several subtle patterns. In some cases some weak adjectives are linked with strong ones, like the connection of 'strong' and 'stallion' and also 'fast' and 'ornery'. There are also some weak situations with rhyme, with the end of a verse finishing with 'statement' pulls together with 't-shirt' and also the end statement of 'ornery' fits with 'stories'. As for the end statements, they first one starts off with punctuation, and then for five lines there is none on the end, then a comma, and then three lines without any punctutation at the end, and the punctuation, none, punctuation for two lines. So as time goes on there are more pauses before starting a new line. This also relates to how strong and tough he was in the past but as time goes on he must take more pauses for he is tired and old.
The speaker talks about the tattoo first and after the description of the tattoo, there is a period which suggests period between youth and age. After that description there are only commas for punctuation. The tattoo is discussed in the past tense 'What was once meant to be a statement' showing that this tattoo signified what the man was in his youth. He compares who the man was in his youth to being 'as strong as a stallion, fast and ornery,' and then addresses how he is now; 'he is only another old man...his heart gone soft and blue with stories'. It is said that that tattoo is "now just a bruise...where vanity once punched him in the arm." The words punched and bruise portrays that the tattoo was a stamp he deserved more than it was his choice. When the speaker mentions that the old man is 'soft and blue with stories' it connects to the tattoo because a tattoo is something permanent yet fades with age, such a stories. Stories are a part of your youth that you remember, they will always be there and there is no getting rid of them, although they also fade in time. The speaker links strong adjectives when talking about his past, such as 'fast and ornery' or 'strong as a stallion. However, once talking about the present the old man is described as 'only another old man' and that 'his heart gone soft and blue with stories'. This underlines that there is nothing special that makes him stick out. The fact that he walks through the tables his sleeves are rolled up, even though it was previously stated that it was a chilly morning asserts that it is the only thing that shows who he once was. The old man is picking up broken tools which also connects with who he is; something once strong and helpful is now just old and not needed.
In this poem, there are only several subtle patterns. In some cases some weak adjectives are linked with strong ones, like the connection of 'strong' and 'stallion' and also 'fast' and 'ornery'. There are also some weak situations with rhyme, with the end of a verse finishing with 'statement' pulls together with 't-shirt' and also the end statement of 'ornery' fits with 'stories'. As for the end statements, they first one starts off with punctuation, and then for five lines there is none on the end, then a comma, and then three lines without any punctutation at the end, and the punctuation, none, punctuation for two lines. So as time goes on there are more pauses before starting a new line. This also relates to how strong and tough he was in the past but as time goes on he must take more pauses for he is tired and old.
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